quite nice track with interesting edits and changes. i am liking the resonating background ambience and that voice in the break sounds nice aswel.
as for the production, sounds quite nice even some more work will be needed. i feel like that snare sound is bit loud and killing other percs, maybe lower it down little bit and try to enhance the other sounds in mid region.. also i feel you could make the sub bit more rumbling underneath the kick .
but,, i can be wrong as i am on new monitors and not too familier with them.hehe.cheers mate.