I'll write as I listen: Nice and driving from the off - good stuff. I feel the kick is masked a bit by the top end percussion, some of which is a bit messy for my liking. I like the synth line that comes in after the first break, has a nice retro feel too it. The off beat high hat ges swamped a bit as the track progesses. Is that a tom or something in the second break? Or the start of synth stab? Either way it sounds a bit random. I like the wierd chopped up vocal or whatever it is, nice and dark. The ride, for me, again gets swamped and isn't prominant enough in the mix. Just focusing on that kick again, it has a real nice snap to it. AND a track with a proper outro!

Good stuff man.