Great stuff mate. Really liking my melodic techno at the moment. Good use of stereo, track is well structured and well balanced.

Great synth noises, would definitely offer them a bit more warmth though. Overall the track sounds lush but a little cold and clean. The kick gets a little weedy in places as said before.

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Just listened to the updated version, missed that.
Much more warmth and depth. Good work! A bit brittle in the high end though, might want to smooth it out a bit up there...