This is sounding much better now Vino.
You gotta keep the synth. I would like to hear the other that plays lower down featured more.
I think if the synths faded up rather than just came in then that would solve the problem as much as turning the volume down would.
But you know me mate I like introducing my elements like this.

Theres deffo more of a theme now then when I first heard it and it develops well I think.
Personaly I like it without edits.To me it gives it a more cosy vibe(does that make sense?)

Production wise im on shitty pc spks but I know what yr production is like(and its pretty consitant)
Ill check it at home.