very trancy for this section.

maybe try the trance production files?

on the actual production.. all the elements sound on top of each other. you should use the stereo width a lot more.
the bottom end needs phattening up a lot too.

the tune isnt actually too bad at all.. not my kinda thing but a bit of work to it will get it sounding great.

WHAT THE HELL IS THAT LITTLE VOCAL SAMPLE FROM.. ITS DRIVING ME MAD TRYING TO REMEMBER? underworld?