this is a good tune.
as you said its only a few hours work so could probably do with a little more attention.
the bassline/synth thing works very well and adds a lovely dark feeling to it.
i think the hats could do with a touch more grit as they're a little too "nice" and they seem to lose clarity when the ride comes in.
also the overall sound is ever so slightly scooped.
great track though.