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Really not my style, so don't want to comment too much but I found in loop and parasite unlistenable on headphones - and they're dead good headphones. The distortion drowned out everything.

I'm sure it sounds different on speakers, but it sounds like you've over-limited it and crushed all the dynamics to me. Maybe this is what you were after, but it sounds over driver. The bass and the dynamics seem to both have given way to loudness.

Like I say, not my style but I've head plenty of stuff along these lines and I would expect deep bass and a clear thumping kick to penetrate through the distortion in the middle. I'd spare the limiters, beef up the kick and rebalance it a bit, this would sound much better with more dynamics and a broader frequency range IMO

Trace is more musical, nice highs and synths but there isn't really any bass. The kick should be much deeper and overall the track sounds a bit tinny and overly skewed towards the upper end of the spectrum.

I'd look at rebalancing it all a bit. Maybe listen to things on different speakers and headphones - find the balance that suits a few different listening devices.

Always found it a helpful tip - trying things out on different systems - studio/rig/car stereo/hi fi/studio headphones/in ear headphones etc
A well balanced track should shoud good on all of them.

Some good ideas and direction in there, need a bit more work to make them shine through.