movement:
nice deep stuff man! the sounds used are all very eerie and is right up my street when im on a deeper buzz! strings are vvery lush, and really work well with the other sounds.
production wise, i reckon you could get a bit more clinical witht he sound separation. the kick is nice n big at the beginning, and when the bass comes they sseem to overlap a bit... so maybe some EQ or Sidechaining would help you out there. once you start separatiing more you'll begin to feel the track open out a bit more.. leaving some space at the top end..
re: the reverb... if you are using reverb on a send track.. id say maybe drop it back 2-3dB just so it sits back in the mix a bit more as reverb can begin to wash a mix...
i really liek the tune itself. great deep stuf.. with warped movement/progression.. nice!!