Yes, great use of the percussion here which really keeps the tune moving...:)

Thought the filtering was wicked in taking away lead elements and replacing them with new ones... and then returning to your lead sound very deftly -
(very impressed with this as I havn't yet got round to filtering and have been thinking about it - tis a very good example for me to follow, so thank you for that)

Sprinkle some sparkle into the mid to highs, as has been mentioned, to brighten things up a little which will sharpen the focus...

I think if you concentrate on the verbs like you have on the rest of the track you will have a track that really does keep the standards high...