the mix sounds good, everythings nice and clear, it's nice stuff.
I don't like some of the percussion sounds though, the main snare and the cymbal that comes in on the down beat, they don't sound electronic enough for me. Also I can see what you're doin with the drone, but I'd want it to be doin more musically, rather than just a single note filtered. I can see what you're tryin to achieve though and those are just my presonal preferences.