you know, i rather like this one.

the trance type bass isnt really my thing but it works well with the track.

my fav part is when the kick starts to shuffle, i think ya could of done the whole tune this way.

looking up at the other replies. i'd bring the kick out a little bit, the bass just takes the edge off it slightly.

not bad at all.

is this a new direction for you then, or just a little experimentation??