The start of this track is awesome, really subtle, then that synth comes in at 40 secs, and although I like the idea, I think a different sound would work better there. Also the main stabs that go through the tune could be a better sound, the da, da-da ones.

I actually like this more second time round, I think it defo one to keep working on. I think if you can work some of the sounds more into unison, you could make better use of that lovely background burble, which I personally reckon should be the focal point of the tune, rather than hiding away. The first 40 secs just sounded soooo good.

Good ideas, a bit more work and it'll be a belter.