It's hard to comment on production becuase the bitrate on myspace is always such low quality. So I cannot tell what of it is from compression of the mp3 or the production itself. I like the basic ideas of the tune...maybe some more edit work...another Stab type sound or something. The synth which comes in on the first break I think is very loud and possible some subtractive EQ will make it sit within the mix. It seems very above and seperated from everything else.

I hope my comments are helpful. Thanks for sharing and keep them coming...