^^ thats definitely the goal...

Have had a rework of this, tried to rebalance it better.
Put the bass back in the synth, put a bit more grit and presence in the synth & high end. Bit more verb and chorus on the synth to widen it out.

Abandoned all attempts to master it, always sound slightly rubbish.

Updated link is the same if anyone's curious:
www.blackboxtechno.co.uk/moglin.mp3

Thanks loads for all feedback, been a good track to learn from....