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[platform1]

Hey man some really good ideas and really good sounds although i do think it sounds like 2 or 3 different tracks welded together.

In my opinion (which dont really count for much) i think you need to make the different parts relate to each other abit more.. if you know what i mean. only listening to it on bad computer speakers so could be missing half the picture, but does sound very clean and crisp on these bad boys.

[Tyrisia]

I think the kik needs a tad more low end, likin the ideas though, great "poppy" beat, it's got a great "distressed" feel to it, I think Cal's right tho, it needs a pad or drone or summit to give a constant, as the track seems to be changing so frequently with all the different ideas.

Nice work though, especially the bit between the 15 sec and 40 sec mark, more of that please;)