I think the kik needs a tad more low end, likin the ideas though, great "poppy" beat, it's got a great "distressed" feel to it, I think Cal's right tho, it needs a pad or drone or summit to give a constant, as the track seems to be changing so frequently with all the different ideas.

Nice work though, especially the bit between the 15 sec and 40 sec mark, more of that please;)