This is great stuff mate. Production is lovely, some great ideas and sounds in the this track.

The housey/disco loop underneath works great, kinda expected the track to go in a different direction though. Its got a real funk to it - shuffly highs, good offbeat bass. A really good groove. The surging bass synth sounds fantastic as well.

I'm not into the melancholy verbs sounds, thought they sounded out of place on a track like this. But this is personal, I could hear a funky daft punky number grooving away in this, and so the verby sounds kinda got in the way of the mood of the track.

All depends on what your aiming for, but if you took them away and put in some more funky elements you'd have a great tech house track, sort of stuff darren emerson used to play. Funky, bassy and driving.

So my 2 cents would be bin all the sad synths, speed it up by 5bpm and chuck some more funky stuff at it, and I'd happily play it :)