Well into the moodyness of this tune... :)

The beat is a bit strong against the other elements but is perfect for the overall feel... i.e. not 4x4

Love the synth layers, which complement very well...

Structures very interesting too and could do another 30 secs easy, as you start the beat up again at 5.20ish...

Perhaps you could focus on that rather nagging hook, make it much more than it is at the moment... play around with your effects and chains, see what you come up with as variations on that theme...

I like it when you hear a regular sound throughout a track n then you hear it warped-off in some way n think, 'how the hell did they do that with that...?'

Good stuff...:coolio: