Quite a powerful track going on here... :)

Best bits for me are where you change the synth pattern n it sets off in a different direction and then later for your outro...

I am only listening on the crappest speaker in the world, at work, but I do get a sense of menace underlying the tune, which I think could be capitalised on a little bit more...

This can be helped by changing direction again, (as mentioned), and maybe re-arranging the structure so that your outro pattern is brought in earlier and becomes a sort of bridge instead...

The tune is definitely indicative of the title...