Quote Originally Posted by acos1 View Post
hey guys thanks for the comments. i has hopping you'd actually comment about it kinda sounding cold in parts cos i kinda noticed myself after a few listens but wasn't sure about revisiting it. i dont know if its the main melody thats too high or that the hats etc are too low. that was buggin me also. what ya think? i know its hard to tell from a myspace stream. ill have another look and post the finished track soon.
This is a pretty good tune... I would certainly revisit it as so far it has the right structure to keep a minimal track interesting for sure... I like minimal if it's kept interesting...:)

I reckon that you should now play around with some nice effects, one's that you havn't tried on anything yet, to create some interest in your lead synth stabby part... the tune is crying out for this at about 3.10 - 3.20odd as you pause briefly n then set off again...

Really like the title n you have captured the mood that goes with it really well...

Maybe incorporate one more sound just to help you lead your progression, as minimalists love that sort of thing... I think...