Good stuff dude, takes a bit too long to kick in, but when it does it's got a great interesting rolling melody, really diggin it. Also like how you've kept the beats snappy and minimal-ish. That break's pretty good, but I think the low drone could play a bit more mean, sounds a bit too major and happy to go with the minor feeling of the rest of the melodies. I actually think just changing the third note by a semitone might do it, although I'd need to play it on the keyboard to be sure.

Great ideas, keep at it man, it's got real potential.