Bloodstar - new unfinished track

[Siege]

yeah,im liking this...tough driving stuff...production sound pretty clean n punchy,which i like and i like all the sounds uve used..percs etc..
Would like to have heard a more prominent sound in there somewhere..big pad or synth..something for me to remember it by..but just personal pref...still sounds good.
U could use the hoover type bassline more in there as well i reck as i noticed it only plays right at the end of the trk.

Good stuff though mate..ur stuff sounding better and better every time i listen

[Little_Fella!]

Enjoying the drive this track has... you have worked a good bit on your percussion there and it shows...:) do like the kick...

Really do think that you should bring in that synth on the break, which feels like a core element, as this will help the tune develop, which at the moment you are relying on just a couple of repetitve notes from something else after the break...

Think those notes need touching up on the top end too to blend in the mix a little bit more, as they seem dull in comparison to your other elements.... and some variation with these also...

As you say, this is a first draft so I reckon you will be able to work this into a proper interesting groove...