Liking the feel of this, especially the tick-tock of the kicks.

Percussion is really nice too, very driving and industrial.

I`d watch the bass on this, it seems to be reachin up into the low mids and clouding the mix a little, so I`d low pass and cut anything over 250

Hats could be brighter to balance the sharp click of the kicks.

I`d work on bringing all the atmospherics up in the mix too, paying careful attention to how they effect the low mids again.

Obviously a first draft so your still working it, but I like it.

there`s a lot going on in here I really like, lots of scarey psychoaccoustics, but they are buried in the mix, so you just need to be more brave with your levels.