Great stuff mate. Nicely balanced, great groove on the go, nice shuffle with a funky bit of menace to it. Sub bass is evil

Sounds are a little dry, think you'd benefit from a touch of verb to tie everything together. Easy fix though.

Composition wise it needs to do something, needs a hook or more structure or progression to the percussion to let it stand on its own. It all sounds great but it needs to go somewhere or do something.

Really like your style mate, will keep ears peeled for more. And for a first track this is exceptional - top drawer mate. Keep at it!