Good start, I think your main issues here are separation between the sounds. Everything sounds like its sitting in one cramped box. Very centered, and the stuff that is panned is panned in an uneven way. The midrange sound that's panned hard right should be adjusted.
There's also lack of bass in here in terms of frequencies deeper than the kick. Try taking your main synth that comes in and layering another one with it a few octaves lower.