New track, help wanted.

[Barely Human]

Yo people, been working on something the last couple of days and im kinda stuck. Completely went off in a different direction than what i was intending and now i dunno if this sounds right or not. Any idea, suggestions would be aprieciated. -

http://www.thefaction.co.uk/audio/cl...nfinished).mp3

[BRADLEE]

Not sure what you were looking to do, but sounds like it's going fine thus far Alex...bit of the hardcore influence on the synths.

[Loop]

I like the first 3 mins so much i'd just tweak that loop, it's a peach, maybe loose a bit o synth and that, the end is kinda like a remix being added.

[xfive]

I don't think its a bad thing that it goes off in another direction.. I say keep it different like that... makes things interesting and unexpected!