it has quite a quirky sound but it works imo, this would really benefit from applying some reverb to certain channels and adding a couple of layers to fatten out some of the sounds. but for a second finished track its sounding good mate.

perhaps experimenting with some delay on the first lead sound that comes in and perhaps giving the arnie sample a little reverb to blend it in a little.

structure isnt bad but perhaps adding a part in the middle were both the original lead sounds are lost and replaced with something to act as an interlude then come back in together along with some extra percussion after the break, a thick off beat hi hat and a large clap with a predelayed reverb on the clap might work, have a go at giving certain elements a little distortion too and see what you like the sound of.