Righto, well before I talk about this.
If you have new monitors, then don`t expect any decent results for a month or two.
Your ears will take time to tune in to the new sound.
Also your drivers will take time to wear in, so to speak.
Trying to finish a mix on new monitors will always be frustrating.

Spend a few weeks listening to lots and lots of music through them to tune your ears.

Anyway, after saying that the mix sounds good overall.
The bass is a little boomy in the high bass area, probably around 100hz or so.
This will sound ok on monitors but once on a rig, I think the bass might overpower the kick. A 2-3db cut away in the bass at about 80hz on a medium Q setting might help this.

I suspect this is just down to you not being used to the monitors, or you might have some room problems.

I get what you mean by familiar, there is something 2000 era techno about this, but that`s ok, if there is another main point of interest added to this rather than just the stabs, it could be a good solid stomper.