not my fave track of yours i have to be honest mate, i dont think some of the elements fit together that well at all, with the break being my main gripe. Just doesnt seem to sit well or compliment the other elements, which certainly suit the latter half of the track more so, by that i mean when the 4/4 kick eventually kicks in, which i thought was farrrrr too late, i lost alot of interest waiting so long for it to come in when the track doesnt exactly build up in a really frenetic way to justify the wait if you get me?

production is ok, could do with alot more stereo width though i thought mate everything sits around the same area in that aspect. I personally would EQ all the main elements alot more to help them sit in the mix better and spread them out more too, maybe some more verb and chorus to help things along

i'd also look into automation more too to give some elements more dynamics as some of the sounds that just repeat did repeat just a little too much for my tastes