This track would sit nicely on Tracid Traxxx - - A.S.Y.S. n the like... structures great and is one of those tunes that 'plays D.J.' too with all the filtering edits n stuff... keeps everything interesting without over doing it...

Yeah I think the bottom end is a touch too strong, only pull it back slightly though I think.. lots of very interesting moody techno sounds going on..

The slightly acidy 4th bar off beat stab element you bring in at about 1:50 could do with being stronger and more acidic to balance it with the other tougher elements you have going on...

Moody and brutal is the word and this would be a nice feature track for a D.J. to complement his set with and also have a dance to it themselves...

Interesting work... you got anything else going on but in a different style, as you've captured this one very well...