:; This is quite busy with a number of edits, programming wise, and I think the bottom end carries the tune rather well....

I think you just need to have a sift through your sound banks to find that one element that sparks this tune off and gives it meaning... I like the bit crushed element and think this could be played upon as a sensation... maybe drop the tempo a little, say to 143bpm and see how that feels - - especially where the bit crush element is... the tempo as it is leaves no real 'dwell time'...

I reckon a bit of a rework will bring this to life...