not bad tune. i like the nice atmo in it. all the pad sounds here and ther are pretty sweet,. this track have some potential i think.
but production needs some work imo. bottom end sounds bit muddy and that offbeat oomph bassy kick sounds to loud. generally, sounds needs tad better separation EQ wise and also bit more energy and thump in themselves. i would suggest to find good balance kick vs hats and then work from there....hope it makes sense. cheers....