You know what, i like this. How bout some kind of some really slow orchestral movement fading in at around 1:00? and then at 2:00 have a really heavy bass synth building a kind of doom feel....
Not sure about the pipe organ type sound at 2:35 though, the chord change in it is nice, but maybe a different sound (if that makes sense?)
Can i play with it? or do i HAVE to leave it alone?