Quote Originally Posted by DannyBlack View Post
A mate of mine runs an EBM night and wants me to make a 3 minute track advertising it, I havent a clue about EBM and all the stuff I can find on youpube is trancey manky shit so i decided to go it alone. Here is an out take of what I have so far- i really need opinions please lads!!!

http://rapidshare.com/files/11447717...ogoth.mp3.html
Check out tracks by David Carretta, they are the shit! I think one of the keys is a catchy, not overly complicated, or too long metallic-y synth riff, you could try to throw in some mono-tone lyrics maybe.

His website is www.davidcarretta.com, theres a track player on his website, it plays a lot of his tunes. They inspire me, so I imagine they would do the same for you. They seriously kick ass.