This track has the right elements for techno without a doubt - - quite nagging and yet has warmth on the bottom end - - good arrangement too...

The section which you bring in on 42 secs I like and I was looking for it again at around the 3 min mark - - I like the lead sound you start with but I think it will be more emphasized if you take it away for a few bars here n there, on a 'less is more' tip - - make it talk as such - - or you won't be able to extend the track much beyond 4 mins I think... plus your levels need balancing so I would reset your desk and bring everything in again on fresh ears - -

I like the ride on my headphones but it didn't come across right on my monitors - so not sure on that - although it has the perfect tone for the track, I would thicken it up a bit... I would EQ your sounds a bit more too to add clarity giving that crystal clear feel to that nice synth sound you got going...

Aint been able to listen for a while and have enjoyed the mood of quite a few tracks that have been posted up - - nice one