Cheers for your comments little fella just the sorta advice i was looking for... i always find half way through the project i seem to lose track of the ideas i had when i started it.

Ive re-uploaded the track

http://www.speedyshare.com/908122584.html

I think its pretty much finished, theres a few minor improvments ive got in mind.. The mix is nice and warm, im not sure if i should brighten it up as i find the highs on my alesis monitors are alittle inacurrate. I always notice a difference when testing my tracks on other systems.