Fruity Loops winner

[Spacehopper]

Been inspired recently by watchin some dudes fruity loops tutorials on youtube and just had to buy it, been wantin to produce music for a long time but only just got round to doin it.....this is my first tune (bear in mind ive only had it a week and have only just began to explore what i can do with it).....if anyone could point out anythin that could be better let me know.....

its a hardcore tune with prodigys your no good for me sample

http://www.mediafire.com/?lymzbdajcfu

cheerz