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Had a listen to this, nice track and you've got some good ideas in there.

Sounds like you've put a bit reverb under the kick. Is that right? There's a slightly washy sub rumble sitting under the track, not sure whether thats a seperate part or the result of the a verb....

Anyways, you need to be careful a bit because that sort of sub rumble will create a lot of mud in the bass part. Make sure that the rumble doesn't interfere with the bass in your kick part, and be sure there's no rumble around the 200-300hz mark as it will just end up muddying everything up.

Bass sounds are exaggerated to your ears when panned, so best keep them central, but any high frequency noises should be panned nice and wide.

Not sure what software you're using, but one way to do it is set up a couple of reverbs on send channels. Use one reverb to create a bass rumble, then stick a filter over the top of it cuttin out the upper reverbs soudns and everything abover the 100hz mark really. Make this reverb mono, or with very little width (very small if any LR offset)

Then do another verb with a bigger LR offset that fills up the soundspace, filter all but the high end freqs then and route any perc, synth or high freq sounds to that, and the verbs will play about in the soundspace and fill up the track nicely, and give a sense of space and depth.

Kick is a little weak, needs more oomph further down into the bass. At the moment all the bass is coming from that rumble sound. Maybe put some more bass back in the kick, or layer a subby kick underneath. Use some sidechain compression to wrap the sub rumble around your kick, which will make the rumble breath a little more and sound more rhythmic