Danny- Conscious Incompetence.

[force]

Hiya Dan,

First of all, the drums sound a bit thin and dry. maybe use a longer, subby kik, a bit less tinny. Also, some delay on the hats should give it a bit more movement.

I'd also personally add an LFO on the filter of your main synth/bassline, again to give the track some more movement and groove. it does sound a little flat at the moment.

I remember that slow track you made a while ago, that was f:ucking brilliant mate. If you can try and get into the same zone as you did with that one, you're definately moving in the right direction...

[DannyBlack]

Hiya Dan,

First of all, the drums sound a bit thin and dry. maybe use a longer, subby kik, a bit less tinny. Also, some delay on the hats should give it a bit more movement.

I'd also personally add an LFO on the filter of your main synth/bassline, again to give the track some more movement and groove. it does sound a little flat at the moment.

I remember that slow track you made a while ago, that was f:ucking brilliant mate. If you can try and get into the same zone as you did with that one, you're definately moving in the right direction...

cheers matey, agreed- the drums are just kind of biding their time a bit. im gonna try and rough them up a bit, i might change the snare to something a bit chunkier.

LFO on the bass line is a good idea me thinks too, my problem is when i start messing with the LFO i go waaaay over board :lol:

I think something in the mid might give it more movement, a funky bongo type perc. i messed around with toms, but i really cannot stand toms!

Cheers for the feedback mate, im all over it!!! :-)

[Siege]

On the dl now Danny mate.....will have to listen later as my computer is currently spazzing out.

[djfilthmonger]

cheers matey, agreed- the drums are just kind of biding their time a bit. im gonna try and rough them up a bit, i might change the snare to something a bit chunkier.

LFO on the bass line is a good idea me thinks too, my problem is when i start messing with the LFO i go waaaay over board :lol:

I think something in the mid might give it more movement, a funky bongo type perc. i messed around with toms, but i really cannot stand toms!

Cheers for the feedback mate, im all over it!!! :-)

Im in work now so ill give feedback when i get home,
Just ur statement there about toms.....


Dont under estimate the power of the toms.

I personally have been tryin to improve and I suppose learn the sounds and concepts of different percussion sounds, Toms are sweet man and give u a great driving sound among other things ....
Ill send you a sample of sumtin im working on with toms init and ull see wat i mean. Im goin to play around more with the track before i post up here.

P.S. Gizza a go of ur clunge will ya!

[djfilthmonger]

tight track man. loving the synth work. cant wait for the end result .