Quote Originally Posted by EmotionComplex
right i gave this a proper listen (last time was through my headphones)

the structure of the second track is good and i personally like the ideas but heres stuff that needs sorting.

Kick drum = Needs to be a lot more defined, compress the bitch.

EQ = The hats/claps etc that are allready there needto be brought out,get them sparkling through the mix, the 96kbps mp3 might be effetcing them also, but im going from what i can hear at the moment.

The main riff could do with a serious dose of eq ing also, open up the mid range a little and take away some of the bottom end and perhaps widen the stereo image of it to fill it out.

The bass line is also very weak in the mix, bringup its level.

Basically youve got 90% of a good track here, the problems just lie in the eq and layers of it. Get the percussion busyer and the other elemes in there own space and youl be sorted.
good feedback. I heard most of what you are saying when I first listen to it... but after more and more of hearing I thought it was great idea's in there and sound.