just listening to last version. i like it, nice funky percussive track. as it goes, i am missing some moody atmo sounds, or soudscape so it makes it more outstanding track and not just another filler track. i mean, just another proper filler, hehe.
production seems to be fine, except the low mid hi bass area. there seems to be too much energy in compare to sub, and rest of sounds. personally, i would try to lower it down just a bit.
good work.