Cooly

First thing is the kick maybe sounds a little over compressed, or at least compressed in a way that leaves it a little too flappy. I`d pull the attack back just a touch to allow a little more woomph in.
Just a touch.

The bass I think could be a touch fuller also, as at the moment it sounds very much like a radio mix. Bringing it up a touch would sound fuller.

The hats sound a little over processed maybe, a little too thin. Too much EQ?
They sound a little flat and could do with a touch more sparkle.
I`d maybe look at applying compression to them to widen them out, or use less EQ.

Overall the mix feels a little too processed, and a touch too unnatural and sharp.
I think the problem is over EQ. None of the sounds really stand out and make you pay attention, they all seem far too equally weighted and processed, making the overall dynamic very flat.

I`d pick one or 2 main elements and give them more room to breath, pull back some of the EQ on them and maybe compress them a touch for a little size.