interesting tune. very nice surprise you working on other styles, too. i am liking, very moody, kinda Bjorkish sound you have got there.
production seems very nice.
personally, i would mash up the vocal bit more. it could have nice gritty evil feeling together with the guitars.
also, i'd try to widen the sounds bit more. even more verbs, spatial filtered delays, modulations etc...
track stands nicely on vocal and the atmo sounds. so there is not required to keep them so close to the kick. they deffo could go with bit of widening.
very good track, anyway.