Thank you for the listen there - - much appreciated :) this new mix is done on headphones at work so the changes may be outta balance a bit...

http://www.mediafire.com/?nyykvtnaujk

@ Fils - - cheers for that n glad the structure gives some pointers for you

@ p_brane - - have worked on the brightness n there is a simple synth note now to add another layer ( not sure its the best option for now - but am outta time ;)

@ Siege - - cheers for the encouraging words there - - it's nice to know some progress is being made ! :; ... have introduce more into the mix along the lines mentioned, so hopefully it is a bit closer to a stand alone track, as you say...

@ stjohn - - and thank you too for the encouragement - - I think perhaps the growler bass idea would polish this mix off nicely if I place it neatly somewhere's, giving the track a final element of progression... groovy