Yo benjy!

Production is really coming along. Mix sounds fuller and fatter, and the balance is much stronger. Individual patterns are sounding more intricate, and there's a nice groove going on. Sounds a little dry on the FX, could do with some more space in the track and movement but overall my main comments are to do with the arrangement and the structure.

Caveat that this is subjective, and needs to be taken as a personal opinion (and with a pinch of salt) but for me you need some more focus on this one, how it progresses, what element is driving, what part is in charge etc. There's lots of cool elements, but they don't seem to gel for me, I can't tell whats driving the track and I sort of zone out a bit. There's lots of cool layers that build and sit on top of each other but it sounds a little jumbled and without any clear direction. Maybe strip back to the dominant layers and have the other layers support, or play one layer off against another but as is sounds a little unstructured.

I've been listening to stuff differently lately. I got soooo absorped in trying to emulate the "sound" of records I loved and frustrations at not being able to get my production skills to a standard where I would emulate the feel of certain records, I overlooked structure. Now whenever I listen to stuff I start mentally deconstructing tracks down into al their components, their patterns and seeing how they work together to form a groove, how themes are allowed to dominate then recede, how tracks get their drive essentially.

Hope that makes some sense mate.