Liking the elements you got going in this and would say that, it being a minimal affair you don't need many more... on headphones but the bass is nice n clean I think... nice clear defined sounds

I reckon this track is longing for some shuffle n a bit o sliiiding here n there - - with appropriately placed strange ride for a few bars in places - - or something similar that covers those frequencies...

A thoughtful outing here Darren... nice one