electro track

[Col]

more of a mature sound from me guys, its pretty laid back. tell me your thoughts please.

just a 16 bar clip:

http://www.dancetech.com/members/my_...F358714061.mp3

[dan the acid man]

nice one col :clap: you need to finish this one, its could be good.

[Mika Silo]

i'm not quite in to this stuff, but it sounds well produced :) like dan said, you def. need to finnish it :lol:

[Col]

cheers guys ;)

[thorin]

This is ok, good well known rhythm structures, but it sounds like its in a box and needs some flavour. Good for a beginner track:)

[Col]

This is ok, good well known rhythm structures, but it sounds like its in a box and needs some flavour. Good for a beginner track:)

ive been making music, or at least trying, for over 4 years. and i dont think i could have made this track when just starting out. i appreaciate the comments though. what do u mean by in a box? too much going on in one area of the freqency spectrum?

[thorin]

The drum programming is good. But the samples/patches sound like something out GM midi synth or a cheap soundcard. The bell sound etc. is not harmonic, there is no air in the sounds, the ride sounds too much like a triangle. Also, this is only a beat, there is no content to indicvate origianlity. I would like to hear more tho, the programming is v.good so it is likely that other stuff you do is good, gimme some more dude:))

[Col]

The drum programming is good. But the samples/patches sound like something out GM midi synth or a cheap soundcard. The bell sound etc. is not harmonic, there is no air in the sounds, the ride sounds too much like a triangle. Also, this is only a beat, there is no content to indicvate origianlity. I would like to hear more tho, the programming is v.good so it is likely that other stuff you do is good, gimme some more dude:))

lol :lol: ok mate, fair play. the ride sound that you refer was actually moved yesterday, i understand what your saying. when i finish it i'll post it up (which could take forever)

[thorin]

nice 1, all the elements are there:)) gr8 programmin finish it!