Darren (Force) is definitely one to take note of in this situation - - he is a master of movement, by taking simple elements and making them complex...

With this track you have a nice main riff - - imagine it becoming rather big and controlling the dancefloor - - I can see that you want subtlety - - but it could be sooooooo much bigger

Good structure by the way but I have to point to the 'plastickness' of some of the sounds - - move away from 'samples' as quick as you can - - i have followed this path and finally found it don't work - - at all....

Like the bass so give that a shove - - use a bass enhancer like Baxxpander - - then reign it back a bit n watch your levels, and put a low cut filter on it

Your main riff n lead sounds need chorus n such like effects to make them wider - - you must play with theez and learn them well - - as they will serve you well in the future...