a track ive been working on

[clingan]

ive been making bouncy house for the last 2 years, and in recent months ive developed an undying love for hard trance, so thought i would have a go,
so if you download ide really appreciate the feedback because im new to the style and you guys can possibly give me a few pointers, cheers, chris.

streamable link
http://www.zshare.net/audio/523874058e24aca7/

[LEE.S.I]

easyy man,im quite new to producing meself,ive just give it a listen now,i mean im shit at it so far so i cant realy comment haha but i reckon the riff itself needs work and the bassline is kind of out if u get me,not so much the sound just the way its playing along the track.
keep goin though dude i hear its a steep learing curb all this so Respect!