I've been masturbating my new VST's over the past 48 hours and have found something that seems to be working. I'm pleased with the kick, can't get the rides to behave and there is a shit load more work to do. Before I slog on I need critique from whoever has a few minutes to spare please.

Cheers in advance.

http://rapidshare.com/files/189260951/bloodyhell.mp3